Rough cut feedback.

The following comments are what we received from peers that have seen our rough cut, they contain positives and constructive feedback.

Positive:

• The lyrics link well with the video
• Good lip syncing in the performance
• There is an even balance between the performance and the narrative side of the video.
• Realistic narrative
• Original idea
• Good narrative and performance
• Good mise en scene.

Constructive feedback:

• The shots are too long
• The artist looks too happy when they are singing, considering they have just broken up.
• Need a wider variation of shots
• Very slow paced, more cuts are needed between shots.

We believe that the feedback we received was extremely helpful, research is key to any production, but it is more useful when the feedback is delivered through your target audience. By having our feedback delivered by our target audience, we can alter our production to satisfy the consumers, thus creating a more successful and pleasing text.