Presentation feedback.

What scenes will we film in the Windsor Great park?
> Holding hands and filming typical scenes in a relationship.
What are we going to do to not make the relationship over cliched?
> Keep the homosexual relationship a mystery until the end. Teasing the audience about who the relationship is between until the end when the mystery partner is shown. (Flashback) Or alternatively, the relationship will be kept as relaxed as possible, both actors are comfortable to do this, they will be also under direction to stop the relationship looking over cliched.

Film typical shots of a relationship, showing what two people who are in a relationships would typically do, by doing this we wont make it too cringey for the audience and it will be done tastefully - Challenge the audiences perception of homosexuality.

Why choose Illingworth?
>This particular road is quiet, enabling us to shoot plenty of shots without being disturbed. Also it is close to the other two locations. By doing this we will achieve a better continuity in the editing section of production.
How will you show that the couple has already broken up?
> Matt, the partner who is going to UNI, will drive away. Also the lyrics will show this. Or we will do something similar to this to make the audience easily aware that the relationship is coming to and end.
Costume?
> Usual teenage/indie costume, for example Jeans and tshirts etc. In the scene following or during the break up, Max will be wearing rugged clothes to show depression/sadness.


Our presentation was perceived as different in terms of the homosexual relationship. It may be fairly difficult to make the relationship look legitimate, it has to be acted well. We could perhaps rehearse these scenes before shooting. The directing too has to be fully aware of the acting, to make the relationship look legitimate.

The audience needs to share the same pain as Max will feel in the video (empathy), again this has to be both acted and directed professionally to show this pain. We believe that if we leave the break up until the end, the audience will gain a small sense of attachment to Max or the relationship, so they will feel empathetic towards Max.

Are we trying to be similar to our chosen artist?
> Ed Sheeran doesn't care so much about his image, he cares more about the music he creates. If we agreed with this statement, which we do, we will base our costume & filming on this statement. After all our production and Sheeran's production share the same target audience, therefore elements must remain similar.

Is there a risk in filming on Illingworth?
> This particular road is private, so we shouldn't have a problem with permission or too many disturbances. We will also time our filming around the rush hour of traffic on all roads, so we should gain better filming quality.

We could potentially add more locations to the flashbacks for instance maybe a movie night. We could show the couple when they were together and then slowly edit out the ex-partner. If we done this, we would have to be cautious when filming the room where they were viewing the movie they due to copyright issues.

We should take numerous shots of each scene and shot to gain a better perspective when it comes to editing.

Finally we should check the weather forecast, because we are filming outside and especially because we are filming in a field.